No, not like that. Harder, with more substance. Make me taste it and feel it. Good grammar doesn’t matter; you always do what your grammarian tells you? Don’t talk about concepts like love and hate, talk about the friction between our bodies. Don’t tell me about old lovers, tell me about now, this very moment, the most important moment. Stay away from adjectives. I am a noun. Use only nouns.
Wednesday, August 16, 2006
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